4. Expanding the Main Incident
A more detailed description of the work meeting Aaron had to attend.
Emma’s anxiety about being left at her grandparents’ house.
How the chores started as something small before turning into punishment.
A longer conversation between Emma and her grandmother.
Aaron’s arrival, with a more detailed description of his growing anger.
5. Life After Cutting Ties
Repeated phone calls from his parents.
An unexpected visit to Aaron’s house.
Melissa trying to pressure him into reconnecting.
Extended family criticizing his decision.
Aaron’s calm but unwavering responses.
